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He was becoming uncomfortable. Those soulless eyes of hers. The dance was already awkward enough but her eyes. There was so much mystery behind them and yet nothing to them at all. Perhaps it was all in his head? There was a certain look in the small girls eyes. A stunning look of either fear or striking fear. He wasn't quite sure which. At this point he was a bit too nervous to look at her. This felt odd. She was so much smaller than him. Her face filled with so much color and her eyes-- dull and timeless. Him? He was tall, pale skinned. His eyes were he brightest spot on his body. People stared at the two as they waltzed by. Was this so strange?

Liechtenstein had invited Prussia to the Christmas ball out of, what seemed like, pity. She felt sorry for him after hearing that Switzerland and Austria refused to let him attend. Liechtenstein felt bad for him. She was a sweet girl. Perfect one might say. That one being Prussia. Lili was cute and small. She had naturally pink lips and her cheeks rosy. Her hair was short and a precious golden color. This particular night it was tied up in a bun in a purple ribbon. She looked older this way.

After being invited to the Christmas ball she insisted they dance together. He figured this was another thing she was doing out of pity but her voice was sweet and it was an offer he couldn't refuse. Prussia made sure to keep an eye out for Vash who was most likely already staring him down. He didn't want anything to ruin this moment. The moment between him and Lili. The two danced for hours without any interruption. It would have been perfect if he didn't constantly become fearful of those eyes of hers. As pretty as they might have been there was no life in them. Which scared almost everyone.
"L-Lili, why do you keep staring at me like that?" Prussia asked. The whole night she had been staring very blankly at his face. Which made him nervous.
"Staring at you like what?" Liechtenstein replied without her face moving much.
"N-nothing." Prussia laughed almost like it was joke but he was actually nervous.

Liechtenstein was amazed at the way Prussia moved. He was slow but had a firm grip on her back. Even though he was so much taller than her he seemed perfectly balanced. Prussia didn't see it but she was also keeping an eye out for Vash. She had already spotted him looking in her direction but he didn't move. He looked angry, then shocked, and then....and then he didn't do anything at all. It was completely out of the ordinary. Usually he would attack Gilbert. Not that she minded much. She was too busy admiring Gilbert's face to notice her brother's out of character display. Prussia was charming. Pale as his face might have been it was strong and attractive. The thought made her blush. Which, in return, made Prussia blush. 'It's hard too look at a face like that and not turn red.' he thought to himself. Finally the song had ended. Prussia saw his opportunity and dashed off to catch his breath. Once outside, the man pulled himself together. He figured he could get through the night so long as he didn't think about being with her so much as being with her. If there was really even any difference. He walked back inside to find her and Vash speaking to each other. She seemed happier. The color seemed to have jumped right back into her eyes. Gilbert was disappointed. He thought he might have been getting through to her but maybe he wasn't even close? He turned away to leave the place. Better he left now than stayed the whole party only to be ignored. Maybe he didn't belong with these "classy" people.
"I'm too awesome for this crap anyways." He mumbled to himself. Suddenly, a halt in his movement. Switzerland had a firm grip on his shoulder. This stunned him in fear. The color, what little color, suddenly flushed from his face. "L-l-look man, we were just dancing I didn't do anything I--"
"Yes, you were dancing. Now, get back there and finish dancing with my sister before I pop a cap so far up your ass you won't shit for a month." Vash released Prussia.
"......the hell?" Prussia was confused and it seemed like no other words could escape him mouth except for...'the hell'.
"My sister....Lili....she seemed happy. When she was dancing with you. I hate you. I hate you a lot but....if she doesn't mind you then..I guess I can let her have a little fun."
"Happy? With...me?" Prussia stupidly pointed to himself in disbelief.
"Yes you! Now, get the hell back in there!" Vash was becoming angered by Prussia's stupidity. He directed him back in. His face might have even been redder than Prussia's. This wasn't something he'd ordinarily do. He grabbed Lili and Prussia and pushed them together. He was stepping away when a sudden thought crossed his mind. "Prussia, I will be watching so mind. Your. Hands." He stepped away with out another word.
"Buzz kill, much?" Prussia sighed. Liechtenstein giggled.
"You're funny Mr. Gilbert. Should we keep dancing?" The look on her face sent a wave of heat through his body. 'She's so cute~' he thought. He tried to act cool and aloof.
"If you want to. I mean, I was dragged back in here by your psycho brother." He was becoming even redder looking at the smile on her face as she laughed once more.
"I'm sorry. He just gets really worried about me, you know? He's a good guy. I love my big brother." Lili smiled and reached for Prussia's hand. He took her hand and then the rest of her body and whisked her away.

The dance was finally over and it was time for everyone to leave. They made a big fuss over Austria's musical abilities-- he was playing the piano and instructing the performers the whole time. Prussia could only focus on the smile across Lili's face. Her lips were still pink. They looked small...and soft. He pulled himself out of his thoughts. 'Vash would skin me alive if he knew I was even thinking about kissing his little sister. He'd--' Prussia was suddenly jerked out of his thoughts when the small girl grabbed his face, pulled him down, and planted a soft kiss on his cheek.
"Thank you for dancing with me Mr. Prussia." She smiled at him innocently. Prussia nearly passed with all the blood that quickly rushed out and back into his head.
"Yeah... dancing...thanks." Prussia didn't know what else to say and he couldn't help the satisfied smile that crept on his face. Switzerland has spotted them from a far and was about ready to tackle the pale man if it weren't for Austria who had spotted them as well and rushed over to hold Vash back.
'It's not a real kiss but, it's a start.' Prussia thought.
"Would you walk me home now? I can't find my brother in this mess of people." Lili asked innocently.
"Yeah, I'll walk you." Prussia reached for her hand and the two left together.
"I'LL. KILL. YOU." Switzerland screamed as he was pulled to the floor by numerous other countries who held him back as well.
Merry Christmas, this isn't too Christmas themed but that's because I don't want to write about Christmas anymore >:I xD

I threw in a little Christmas stuff and it does take place in winter so....take it bitch.

This is for :iconsabaku-no-ame:
I'm really glad I have a friends like you. You deal with my insane bull shit and you enjoy me for my creepiness. I FUCKING LOVE YOU. MERRY FUCKING CHIRSTMAS. :I

Merry Christmas mah little protege.

You asked for it and you got it:
P A R T 2: [link]

Hetalia (c) Hidekaz Himaruya
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Ciel-phantomhoof Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
The ending is the best part
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malentia Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have drawn a picture inspirered by your fanfiction, if you like I can link it to you ^^
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student General Artist
oh my gosh. are you for serious? yes, i wanna see thank you so much ; u ;

that is so cool of you ; u ; <333

/i am also sososososo sorry for this late reply i've been dead on here for a while but yes please thank you.
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malentia Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
[link] here you go^^ I hope you'll like it ^^
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Seichee Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
OMG, there's a permanent smile in my face while reading this!
YES PLEASE FOR THIS COUPLE!!! :XD:
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MarshmallowOfDeath Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Aw, thanks <3 and yeah xD This couple is just too cute.
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Seichee Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay, np~!
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amyosaurus-rex Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute!
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much. <3
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Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
XD oh vash we love you for that such a good brother lol also I have to say I think I have fallen for this pairing ^^
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SteelAngelMamimi Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
My fave character is Vash my fave couple is Prussia and Liechtenstein I am absolutely going to favorite this story.
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you ;3; <3333
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awesome-oresama Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
I love this.
PruxLiech is suddenly a pairing that just won't escape my mind now.
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you xD
It's so adorable ;w;
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Dragowing-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011   Writer
ahhH~! <3
it's so wonderful!~
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks :3
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Dragowing-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011   Writer
Welcome!
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Cinders-chan Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
This made me so happy :'D I love it...

Will you continue it maybe? I love it! <3
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Student General Artist
hmmm...well maybe :3 I mean, if enough people like it (In my case 3 people xD you, being the second ;D)

Yeah, I might make a next chapter. :3
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Cinders-chan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
3 people? Time to drag my friends down here :'D

They're fans of good writing. They'll like it. <3
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Aw, thanks. xD I hope they like it. :3 <3
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Cinders-chan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
I dragged my friends down here :'D They loved it too. That's 3 !
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Okay xDD I'm glad they liked it.

since you went through that just to get me to write another chapter, I will.

Sometime this week it will be here :3
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Cinders-chan Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
Yay! <3 Thanks so much :'D
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Welcome. I'll be sure to link you when it's done ;D
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AnimeGal95 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh! This made me giggle and squee so much! *fangirl mode* *3*
I LOVED Vash and his threats towards Gilbert! xD
You've made me fall in love with GilbertxLili...thank you and Merry Christmas! :D
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot xD
I usually write for humor, so thanks xD <3
Really? I did? QwQ <3
and and and Merry Christmas to you too D:<
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AnimeGal95 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome ^^
Ah, I do love a bit of humour. :D
Yesssh, you did! Be proud, very proud! ;D
Hehe, thank you! ;P
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Student General Artist
I am proud. ;D

Thank you for the amazing comment ;o;o;o; :heart:
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AnimeGal95 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, you're very welcome! :D
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Sage-of-Stars Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student General Artist
Dude, you know I Love you. So fucking much. Best friends forever goes to a completely new level with us. Merry Christmas gurl. I love you. You are one of my best best friends. forever. for life. I'll be calling you when were like 30 D:< being all like "HEY GURL WATS GUUD.". BI <3 I swear man, I was watching this show about two high school kids lost in the ocean on a boat for a week and I said "If I were stranded in the middle of the Atlantic ocean for more than a week with one other person, I would need someone smart, funny, caring, and...Ashley. I would need her. Because she would make that damned situation fun D:<". I LOVE YOU MAN Q n Q *brofists* Your amazing. and I can't imagine life with out you. I love you *glomps to death*

and now for the fangirl-ness.

AAJLIFNA UWAAAA!!!!Q U Q THIS WAS SOOOO CUTE!!XDDDD<33I LOVED IT!!!Q W Q <33 Swiss was so funny xDD And prussia is so--xDDD LILI!!SO CUTE!MAN!!!HAAUU~~THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH Q W Q <33
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
Dude, I love you too. You know that. We've known each other forever. FOREVER. If I were stranded on an island, boat, thing I would pick you. No doubt. You've been there for me for so much shit in my life and I feel like i can tell you anything. I tell you everything. I only want for you to be happy because you mean so much to me. I will be your friend FOREVER. No matter what happens. I don't even care. As long as you stay the super sweet, fucking awesome, funny as hell, devious chick you are. You and me will be best friends forever. D:< <3 I can't imagine my life without you. I would take a bullet for you, bro. I seriously can't. I've known you too long and hung out with you too much. *Hug, man, hug* I LOVE YOU D:< <3


You're welcome. xD I tried, bro, I tried. D:< <3
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Sage-of-Stars Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
I...I... I LOVE YOU Q ___ Q <33 :heart:

right back at you man ; 3 ; <33







akfjioajs I LOVED ITT >8U <3 and I hope you enjoy your gift tomorrow it'll be up ;D YOU GOTTA WAIT. o: <3
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
I LOVE YOU TOO ;o;o;o;o;o;o; :iconlovepinkplz:

I gotta wait? D: </3 b-but? BUT WHY. I'll wait :3
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Sage-of-Stars Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
YES.

okey ;D
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Student General Artist
I SAW IT. I dig it :>
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Sage-of-Stars Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Student General Artist
OH YAY.

8v
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SakiaLumei Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student Artist
Switerland's cap poppin threat made me laugh. It was just that awesome.
Yaya for GilvertxLili! I loved the whole fic ^^
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
Oh thanks for your amazing comment. D:< :3 <3
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SakiaLumei Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student Artist
Haha no prob
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Zelda-is-Deviant Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
I love Prussia x Liechtenstein~ <3333

:iconpervyprussiaplz: This makes me happy.
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student General Artist
I'm starting to love it too. xD

I am glad D:< <3
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Zelda-is-Deviant Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010
LOVE IT. LIVE IT. WRITE MORE OF IT. x3
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010  Student General Artist
I will try, man. I WILL TRY. :3 <3
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ChibiKitsune-hime Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student General Artist
That was wonderful XD
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student General Artist
Why thank you. xD I really liked this one. I thought it was humorous.
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ChibiKitsune-hime Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student General Artist
It is.
Vash had to be held down XD
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xXLove-in-MiseryXx Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student General Artist
I was trying to wrap up the end real quick and I figured that would do it. :3
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ChibiKitsune-hime Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student General Artist
It works very well X3
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